im sorry but all your lines are messy, bubbles are placed messy, thumbnail is bad (take a thumbnail from test mode) and incorrect title (dont use anything like 'my 1st hp' or 'first automatic'.
im sorry but all your lines are messy, bubbles are placed messy, thumbnail is bad (take a thumbnail from test mode) and incorrect title (dont use anything like 'my 1st hp' or 'first automatic'.